The chart below contains information provided by Australia's tertiary insititutions about the percentage of male and female students who enrolled in different subjects in 1995.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of male and female students enrolled in various subjects at tertiary institutions in Australia in 1995.

Overall

, Engineering was the most popular subject among

males

while

it attracted the fewest

females

In contrast

, Arts & Humanities had the highest female

enrollment

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but ranked third among

males

Additionally

, Health was highly

favored

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females

but was the least popular choice among

males

. Other subjects showed more balanced

enrollment

between the genders. In terms of male

enrollment

, Engineering led with nearly 20%, followed by Math & Science, which attracted around 15% of male students. Arts & Humanities,

although

popular with

females

, saw about 10% of male

enrollment

, placing it third. Accounting & Economics and Business Studies were chosen by around 7-10% of

males

. Education and Health were the least popular among

males

, each attracting less than 5%. For

females

, the pattern was quite different. Arts & Humanities topped the chart with approximately 20% of female

enrollment

. Health was the second most popular, with around 18% of

females

choosing

this

subject, followed closely by Education. Accounting & Economics and Business Studies were chosen by around 10% of female students, similar to

males

However

, very few

females

opted for Engineering, making it the least popular subject among them, with

enrollment

figures below 5%.

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The chart below contains information provided by Australia's tertiary insititutions about the percentage of male and female students who enrolled in different subjects in 1995.

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