The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

report is derived from

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diagram illustrating the process and the equipment to produce the

cement

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.

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, the operation of producing the

conceret

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concrete

concert

for construction purposes. To produce the

cement

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commence with crushing limestone and clay together,

that

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creates a powder.

This

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powder transfers into the mixer part.

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the mixer powder should cross

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the

rotating heater to heat it and supplement the

cement

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. The final step

,

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included packing the termination

cement

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in bags. After that, we can obvious that, the process of producing the concrete

start

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starts

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and

finish

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finishes

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with one step via mixing the required

element

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elements

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with constant percentages,

involving15

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involving 15

%

of

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apply

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cement

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, 10

of

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apply

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water, a quarter of sand and

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the gravel with half. In conclusion, the procedure of

cement

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produce

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production

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is complete

complete

incomplete

iscomplete

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is complete

with 6 steps,

while

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the concrete needs just one step to prepare for

using

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in the building