You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The map shows three sites in which a supermarket is to be built in the
city
of Ellington which has a population of 120,000.
Site
A, which is located in the residential
area
of the town is near to the
city
of Hampford which has a population of 30,000. It is
also
very close to the park and the
traffic free
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traffic-free
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zone
while
also
being next to the railway which goes through the industrial
area
of the
city
making it an ideal
site
for the construction of a supermarket.
Whereas
,
Site
B, which is in the countryside is east of the motorway and is far away from the
area
where people reside, making it inaccessible to them. Meanwhile,
Site
C is
also
in the countryside
is
Correct word choice
and is
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near to both the industrial and residential
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
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of the
city
.
Site
C is
also
next to the railway and is near
to
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apply
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the airport which is
at
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on
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it's
Correct your spelling
its
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west.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, site, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population density
  • foot traffic
  • residential area
  • commercial area
  • outskirts
  • industrial zone
  • city center
  • commuting
  • accessible
  • proposed sites
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