You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The map shows three sites in which a supermarket is to be built in the
city
of Ellington which has a population of 120,000.
Site
A, which is located in the residential area
of the town is near to the city
of Hampford which has a population of 30,000. It is also
very close to the park and the traffic free
zone Add a hyphen
traffic-free
while
also
being next to the railway which goes through the industrial area
of the city
making it an ideal site
for the construction of a supermarket.
Whereas
, Site
B, which is in the countryside is east of the motorway and is far away from the area
where people reside, making it inaccessible to them.
Meanwhile, Site
C is also
in the countryside is
near to both the industrial and residential Correct word choice
and is
area
of the Fix the agreement mistake
areas
city
. Site
C is also
next to the railway and is near to
the airport which is Change preposition
apply
at
Change preposition
on
it's
west.Correct your spelling
its
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