The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The previous line graph illustrates food categories consumed by
people
in kg
per person
in Australia from 1950 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that in 1950 vegetables were primarly
consumed by Australians, followed Correct your spelling
primarily
meat
and Change preposition
by meat
bread
. In contrast
, seafood was eaten the least, followed by bread
. At the end
of the period (2010) , people
kept their preference for vegetables, being seafood and bread
the
least consumed.
In detail,in 1950, the majority of Add a missing verb
being the
people
consumed vegetables (around 140 kg
per person
) followed by meat (approximately 110%) and fruit (80%). While
the consumption of these 3 products showed certain fluctuation in the next years, in 2010, the three categories continued being the people
's favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
option
.
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options
In contrast
, in 1950, seafood got the least popularity with only 20% kg
consumed per person
, followed by bread
with 40%. Although
the Australian population did not choose to consume a big
amount of Correct word choice
large
bread
at the beginning of the period, its popularity increased, especially in 1970 when it got
its highest peak of approximately 70 Verb problem
reached
kg
per person
. However
, it declined to 60% in
the beginning of the period (2010).Change the preposition
at
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