The graph below shows the percentage of households, grouped by poverty, on the basis of access to refrigerator, electricity and water in Ghana for the year 1991/1992 to 1998/1999. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the percentage of households, grouped by poverty, on the basis of access to refrigerator, electricity and water in Ghana for the year 1991/1992 to 1998/1999.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the shares of households' spending on refrigerators, electricity, and
water
in Ghana between 1991 and 1999 which is divided into several economic levels. In both periods, only 3% of the poorest
society
spent their money on refrigerator usage;
nonetheless
, there was a slight decline in the usage of it in the poor
society
. There were approximately11% of the poor
society
were using refrigerators between 1991 and 1992;
nevertheless
, only 7% of the poor
society
spent their money on the same thing.
On the contrary
, spending on
water
usage experienced a climb compared to other daily household. For the poorest group, 55% of the population allocated their money to
water
from 1991 to 1992, but they experienced a climb of about 2%, which made them to 57% from 1998 to 1999. In conclusion, even though there was a positive trend for spending on
water
use, the other categories of household needs have experienced fluctuations if compared.
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