The line graph illustrates the percentage of workforce in Australia five industries between 1962 and 2012

The line graph illustrates the percentage of workforce in Australia five industries between 1962 and 2012
The graph shows the proportion of employees who worked in different industries in Australia from 1962 to 2012.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the percentage of the workforce in the service sector increased more than the other four
sectors
and manufacturing and agriculture decreased with the exception of construction and mining. In 1962, the service sector had the highest workforce with above 50% and in the next three decades, it boosted to about 71% and reached
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peak in 2012 of 80%.
However
, the construction and mining
sectors
were not changed in Australia between 1962 and 2012 with the exception of some fluctuation in the mining sector. Manufacturing was the second employee with approximately 28%. It was followed by agriculture with 10%, but in the next 20 years, these
sectors
slightly decreased to 20 % and about 8 % respectively and
at the end
of the period these
sectors
registered the same percentages with the proportion of construction and mining fields.
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