The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph illustrates how many residents of Melbourne, Australia engaged in five distinct
programms
in a social centre during two decades from 2000 to 2020.
Correct your spelling
programmes
programs
Overall
, it can be seen that the trend for citizens attending table
tennis
and musical performances are
broadly in line with each other and it is the same for the film club and martial arts. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Furthermore
, amateur
Fix the agreement mistake
amateurs
dramatic
witnessed Change the word
dramatically
decline
in Correct article usage
a decline
Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of participation and constituted an exception Fix the agreement mistake
number
while
table
tennis
enthusiasts were always on the top.
Firstly
, participants in the film club and martial arts remained approximately steady between 60-70 and 30-40 respectively over two decades. Moreover
, the number of citizens attending table
tennis
and musical performances started the period at about 15 and 0 respectively. Afterwards, the figure stood at 20 for table
tennis
in 2005 and 2010 before facing two consecutive marked spikes reaching a peak of over 50 in the last
year. Similarly
, the number rose from 0 in 2005 for musical performances by registering three climbs in a row to about 11, 16 and 19 in 2010, 2015 and 2020 respectively.
Secondly
, participants in amateur dramatics'
sessions plummeted over the entire period and comprised the exception. The figure began at about 16 in the first year before slightly growing to 19 in 2005. Change noun form
dramatics
Subsequently
, the perticipation
rate registered three steep decreases hitting a low of just about 6 residents attending the Correct your spelling
participation
programm
in 2020.Correct your spelling
program
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