The bar chart and table show information about the average daily use and the cost of domestic water in five countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The bar graph depicts the average used
water
per day (unit in kiloliters per property) in six different cities in Australia, with the table showing the percentage of consumption of domestic water
in seven aspects.
Overall
, it can be seen that Perth have the most usage of water
, followed by Brisbane. Moreover
, the highest consumption of water
is used for agriculture.
To begin
with, the highest water
usage is in Perth around 300, which is twice as in Melbourne, followed by Brisbane, with 250, then
in Adelaide for about 240. Furthermore
, the average water
consumption in Sydney was 200, and the lowest is in Canberra with roughly 130.
In addition
, 67% of water
was used in agriculture, and 9% in households. Additionally
, manufacturing and other industries have the same rates at 4%, as well as
water
supply and electricity and gas supply at 7%. Lastly
, the lowest amount of water
was used on mining with 2%ใSubmitted by napatnp18065322 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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