DThe table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britain. The police shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisions where relevant.
The table shows total
police
budget in 2017 and 2018 from different sources in Correct article usage
the police
UK
. The pie chart illustrates to which categories given money was spent.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
,Correct article usage
the
police
budget was 304.7 million
and then
increased to 318.6 million
in 2018. In addition
, the national government was main
organization Correct article usage
the main
what
gave cash in both years. Regarding Correct word choice
that
to
spending, more than half of the budget went to salaries in 2017 and 2018.
Remove the preposition
apply
Firstly
, in 2017 the national government used 175.5 million
to
Change preposition
for
police
needs, in contrast
in 2018 they gave 177.8 million
. According to
local
taxes category, Correct article usage
the local
police
administration took 91.2 million
in 2017 and then
102.3 million
in 2018.
Secondly
, 75% of total
used money was salaries for workers but in the next Correct article usage
the total
year
Add a comma
year,
this
number significantly drop
to 65 per cent total. To compare, technology type of spendings rose from 8 per cent to 14% Wrong verb form
dropped
at the end
. Building and transport was
without any Change the verb form
were
flactuation
.Correct your spelling
fluctuation
fluctuations
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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