THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFOMATION ABOOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A uk university between 2010 and 2012. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.
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The bar graph compares the total
amount
of home and international learners
exploring computer science at the UK college over a 2-year period
.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number of British students
was outstanding
than the Correct quantifier usage
more outstanding
amount
of international Change the quantifier
number
learners
throughout the period
. Moreover
, we can see that the number of men students
living in the UK fluctuated over the period
, whereas
girls showed a steady increase, also
, the sum of international learners
increased throughout the years.
To begin
with, we note that in 2010 the total number of British students
was around 40 before a significant decline to around 25, while
international students
were half as many at 20. From 2011 to 2012, the amount
of both international and home students
increased dramatically respectively from about 23 to below 40 and from under 25 to over 40 in the UK university.
British female students
have demonstrated that they are in a dominant position throughout the period
, in 2010, the total amount
of them was roughly 30, and it rose moderately to below just 45, before reaching a peak at 45 in 2012. Regarding the international women students
, there also
was a slight increase over the given time, from approximately 15 students
to only 20 learners
at the end
of this
period
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