The bar graph illustrates the different proportion of households for owned and rented location in England and Wales from 1928 to 2011.

The bar graph illustrates the different proportion of households for owned and rented location in England and Wales from 1928 to 2011.
In general, there was a contrast between
households
in owned and rented
accommodation
. The figure
of
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rented places decreased strongly
while
the other figure increased dramatically during the period. It can be clearly seen that, from 1918 to 1971, the rented
households
data went down.
However
, it was still higher, even the owned
households
went up.
Initially
, the percentage of rented
accommodation
was the highest, at around 77%. Compared with the data owned
accommodation
was the lowest, at about 22%. In 1939 and 1953, the ratio of rented and owned remained roughly stable at 69% and 31% respectively. After that, they continued their trend to be at the same proportion in 1971, approximately 50%. From 1971 to 2011,
households
in owned
accommodation
took over the rented and reached their own highest, at roughly 69% in 2001, and
then
went down slightly.
Whereas
, the
households
in rented kept going down until 2001 and
then
rose slightly
at the end
of the period.
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