The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares the percentages of hired people in seven kinds of occupations and genders in Australia
last
year.
As can be seen from the bar graph, there are more Linking Words
men
hired than Use synonyms
women
in five types of Use synonyms
jobs
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
women
only dominated two kinds of vocation. The most popular Use synonyms
jobs
for Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
were clerical and professional, Use synonyms
while
the least welcomed job was labour.
Linking Words
Firstly
, it is obvious that Linking Words
men
had higher numbers in five categories of Use synonyms
jobs
that are all over 400,000. Tradespeople were the most welcomed by Use synonyms
men
, with the number of 900,000. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
women
had a comparatively low number in the same kind by 100,000. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, Linking Words
women
had the highest figure at almost 1000,000 for working in clerical Use synonyms
jobs
. Use synonyms
In addition
, professionals were the second highest job occupied by Linking Words
women
at 700.000.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, jobs with synonyms.
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