The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares the percentages of hired people in seven kinds of occupations and genders in Australia
last
year. As can be seen from the bar graph, there are more
men
hired than
women
in five types of
jobs
,
while
women
only dominated two kinds of vocation. The most popular
jobs
for
men
and
women
were clerical and professional,
while
the least welcomed job was labour.
Firstly
, it is obvious that
men
had higher numbers in five categories of
jobs
that are all over 400,000. Tradespeople were the most welcomed by
men
, with the number of 900,000.
However
,
women
had a comparatively low number in the same kind by 100,000.
On the contrary
,
women
had the highest figure at almost 1000,000 for working in clerical
jobs
.
In addition
, professionals were the second highest job occupied by
women
at 700.000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, jobs with synonyms.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Employment figures
  • Sectors
  • Significant disparities
  • Gender balance
  • Skewed
  • Trends
  • Patterns
  • Dominant
  • Inferred
  • Labor market
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Insights
  • Implications
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