The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares the percentages of hired people in seven kinds of occupations and genders in Australia
last
year.
As can be seen from the bar graph, there are more men
hired than women
in five types of jobs
, while
women
only dominated two kinds of vocation. The most popular jobs
for men
and women
were clerical and professional, while
the least welcomed job was labour.
Firstly
, it is obvious that men
had higher numbers in five categories of jobs
that are all over 400,000. Tradespeople were the most welcomed by men
, with the number of 900,000. However
, women
had a comparatively low number in the same kind by 100,000. On the contrary
, women
had the highest figure at almost 1000,000 for working in clerical jobs
. In addition
, professionals were the second highest job occupied by women
at 700.000.Submitted by wendy190427 on
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