The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. M
The presented diagram gives data on how electric
power
is produced in Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a hudroelectric
hudroelectric
Correct your spelling
hydroelectric
hydro-electric
power
station.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
Linking Words
this
diagram contains certain which Linking Words
startin
from Correct your spelling
start in
start
river
coming to Correct article usage
the river
high-level
Add an article
the high-level
a high-level
reservoir
and ending with Use synonyms
ending with
pumping out and pumping in Remove the redundancy
apply
water
.
In accordance with Use synonyms
diagram
the process Correct article usage
the diagram
is starting
Wrong verb form
starts
from
filling Change preposition
with
high-level
Correct article usage
a high-level
reservoir
Use synonyms
andholding
Correct your spelling
and holding
this
Linking Words
water
Use synonyms
by
Change preposition
in
dam
, Add an article
the dam
a dam
then
Linking Words
Use synonyms
water
Correct article usage
the water
flow
in the tube to generate electricity in day, Change the verb form
flows
pass
Correct subject-verb agreement
passes
throw
reversible turbines to operate Correct your spelling
through
generator
, in Add an article
a generator
the generator
generator
creates electricity in Correct article usage
the generator
Use synonyms
power
station and Correct article usage
a power
by
Change preposition
through
power
lines electrity moves to national grid. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
in
Change preposition
during
day
, Add an article
the day
a day
water
goes to Use synonyms
low-level
Add an article
the low-level
a low-level
reservoir
.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, at night Linking Words
water
from Use synonyms
low-level
Correct article usage
the low-level
reservoir
Use synonyms
pass
throw reversible turbines that pump Correct subject-verb agreement
passes
water
to Use synonyms
high-level
Add an article
a high-level
the high-level
reservoir
. Use synonyms
Also
at night intake that Linking Words
open
in Wrong verb form
opens
day
Correct article usage
the day
closed
at night and only enters Wrong verb form
closes
water
but Use synonyms
do
not give Correct subject-verb agreement
does
water
escape and Use synonyms
this
process is Linking Words
repeating
Wrong verb form
repeated
everyday
to create Replace the word
every day
an
electricity.Remove the article
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, reservoir, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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