The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph and pie chart illustrate the
crime
rates of all ages and the kinds of crime
that occurred mostly in the UK last
year.
In general, the maximum age for committing crimes was 20 years old as well and the proportion of violent crime
was the highest.
Having looked at the given pictures for more details, from 0 to 12 years old, the percentage of crime
was very little or even not trying. However
, residents ages 16 to 24 usually committed crimes with the highest being 20 years old at 80%. By contrast
, beginning year 28, the crime
proportion dropped and continued to decrease to under one-tenth at 60.
Related to the types of crime
, the state of violence that happened mostly at 46% which doubled the property rate. Meanwhile, the figure for medication accounted for approximately a quarter. In addition
, the social order crime
figure reached the lowest percentage at 9%.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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