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The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph and pie chart illustrate the
crime
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 rates of all ages and the kinds of
crime
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 that occurred mostly in the UK
last
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 year. In general, the maximum age for committing crimes was 20 years old as well and the proportion of violent
crime
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 was the highest. Having looked at the given pictures for more details, from 0 to 12 years old, the percentage of
crime
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 was very little or even not trying.
However
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, residents ages 16 to 24 usually committed crimes with the highest being 20 years old at 80%.
By contrast
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, beginning year 28, the
crime
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 proportion dropped and continued to decrease to under one-tenth at 60. Related to the types of
crime
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, the state of violence that happened mostly at 46% which doubled the property rate. Meanwhile, the figure for medication accounted for approximately a quarter.
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, the social order
crime
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 figure reached the lowest percentage at 9%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words crime with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph depicts
  • The pie chart illustrates
  • reveals
  • displays
  • depicts
  • the trend of
  • the overall crime rate
  • steadily decreased
  • the distribution of
  • different types of crime
  • prevalent
  • accounts for
  • the most common crime
  • followed by
  • make up
  • a smaller proportion of
  • the total crimes
  • a smaller percentage
  • approximately
  • the remaining percentage
  • It is important to note that
  • reflects
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