The diagrams below show how a district park looked ten years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show how a district park looked ten years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show how a district park looked ten years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps show the layout of a district park in 2009 and the current year.
Overall
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, some major changes took place after 2009,
such
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as the development of
Cycling
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a Cycling
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path on the north
side
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of the park, a new picnic and boating spots near the pond. The major development can be seen on the western
side
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of the park where a soft play
area
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is introduced near the children's play
area
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and a cafe is built in the Green
area
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section.
Few
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A few
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new sites are
also
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there
on
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in
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the south
area
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, where two new sites, boating and picnic spots are developed
nearby
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near
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the pond. The capacity of car parking is
also
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increased from 20 cars in 2009 to 50 cars in
present
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the present
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year. Few sites and areas
in
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on
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the map remained untouched
such
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as the tennis courts, football ground and children's play
area
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in
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on
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the north
side
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of the map and
green
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the green
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area
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and pond on the southern
side
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, such".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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