The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are two pie charts each of which has its own topic. One of them is related to the average rate of using energy by households in Australia. The other pie
chart
shows the proportion of energy which causes
greenhouse
gas
emissions
.
Overall
, Most people use heating and
water
heating in the first
chart
and in the second figure, using
water
heating and other appliances causes
greenhouse
gas
emissions
. It can be seen that Australian household uses 42% heating and 30%
water
heating energy in their lives
while
cooling, lighting, and refrigeration are 2%, 4%, and 7% respectively and each of them is under 10%. Other appliances have just a quarter amount in
this
chart
. In the second pie
chart
,
water
heating and other appliances with 32% and 28% respectively are more effective in producing
greenhouse
gas
emissions
rather than other ones. Refrigeration with 14% and heating with 15% are
also
important in causing
greenhouse
gas
emissions
. Cooling has the least amount of value with 3% among other energies.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, greenhouse, gas, emissions, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average Australian household
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Energy consumption
  • Activities
  • Heating
  • Cooling
  • Water heating
  • Appliances
  • Lighting
  • Standby
  • Percentage (%)
  • Consumption patterns
  • Efficiency
  • Emissions impact
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy-saving measures
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Electricity
  • Natural gas
  • Emissions breakdown
  • Energy audit
  • Environmental impact
  • Conservation
  • Mitigation strategies
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