The first chart shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are two pie charts each of which has its own topic. One of them is related to the average rate of using energy by households in Australia. The other pie
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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