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The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicted the proportion of different categories of families living in
poverty
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 in Australia in 1999. The family types being investigated are
single aged
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single-aged
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 persons, aged
couples
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, single with no
children
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,
couples
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 with no
children
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, sole
parents
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 and
couples
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 with
children
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. The proportion of people from each household type living in
poverty
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 is represented both in percentages and numbers in the table. Single aged
person
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persons
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 and aged
couples
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 experienced the least
poverty
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 with the percentage of 6% and 4% respectively. Single persons with no
children
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 and sole
parents
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 have suffered the most in terms of
poverty
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 with a percentage of 19% and 21% respectively.
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,
couples
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 with no
children
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 and
couples
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 with
children
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 are experiencing
similar
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 percentage of
poverty
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 at around 10%.
By comparison
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, aged
couples
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 and aged persons suffered the least in
poverty
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while
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 single
parents
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 are the worst sufferers of
poverty
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 in the country. It suggested that the government may need to provide more financial support to single
parents
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while
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 aged people are more financially independent.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words poverty, couples, children, parents with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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