The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australlan cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australlan cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.
The chart illustrates the proportion of habits of city residents for purchasing
coffee
,
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and drinks in five different Australian cities in
last
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the last
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four weeks.
Overall
, it can be seen that most of the
people
in all cities went to
cafe
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cafes
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to buy tea or
coffee
while
,
on the other hand
, little
people
went to buy fresh
coffee
in all five cities. Looking into detail,
people
in
sydney
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Sydney
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bought more than 60% of instant
coffee
whereas
more than 45%
people
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of people
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bought instant
coffee
.
Moreover
, the
people
of Sydney consumed 43
coffee
or tea.
In addition
, the point worth noting is that the same
habbit
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habit
happened in Melbourne. In all the five countries less than 45%
people
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of people
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bought fresh
coffee
in the
last
4 weeks.
Moreover
, most noticeably of all it can be seen that, in
Adelaide
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Adelaide,
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people
tend to
bought
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buy
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instant
coffee
instead
of fresh
coffee
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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