The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australlan cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.
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The chart illustrates the proportion of habits of city residents for purchasing
coffee
,
and drinks in five different Australian cities in Remove the comma
apply
last
four weeks.
Correct article usage
the last
Overall
, it can be seen that most of the people
in all cities went to cafe
to buy tea or Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
coffee
while
, on the other hand
, little people
went to buy fresh coffee
in all five cities.
Looking into detail, people
in sydney
bought more than 60% of instant Change the capitalization
Sydney
coffee
whereas
more than 45% people
bought instant Change preposition
of people
coffee
. Moreover
, the people
of Sydney consumed 43 coffee
or tea. In addition
, the point worth noting is that the same habbit
happened in Melbourne.
In all the five countries less than 45% Correct your spelling
habit
people
bought fresh Change preposition
of people
coffee
in the last
4 weeks. Moreover
, most noticeably of all it can be seen that, in Adelaide
Add a comma
Adelaide,
people
tend to bought
instant Change the verb
buy
coffee
instead
of fresh coffee
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