You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear __________

#bank #receipt #card #envelope #head #office #concern #address #__________

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to inquire about my missing debit

card

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from the envelope which I received recently as a paper mail. As my previous

card

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was expiring so I applied for the new one but

due to

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some

reasons

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reasons,

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the bank employee was unauthorized to issue the hard copy of the

card

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right away. So, she apply for the new

card

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which I

suppose

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was supposed

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to receive in

following

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the following

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business day. When I

get

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got

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the envelope, there were two

acknowledgements

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acknowledgement

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receipts but there

were

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was

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offical

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official

card

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as It has been already activated so I am concerned that my personal information is at risk. It would be greatly appreciated if my

card

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will

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would

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be blocked at your earliest convenience and

send

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sent

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the another

card

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as I do not have any

card

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at the moment so It is much needed. I will be thankful if

this

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matter is taken into account. Yours sincerely, Ravinder Kaur.

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complete response

Pay attention to subject-verb agreement in sentences. For example, 'she apply for the new card' should be 'she applied for the new card.'

logical structure

Enhance coherence by streamlining some sentences and avoiding redundancy. For example, 'When I get the envelope, there were two acknowledgements receipts but there were no offical card as It has been already activated so I am concerned that my personal information is at risk.' could be more concise.

complete response

The letter clearly explains the purpose of writing and concerns about the missing card.

suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is polite and formal, which is suitable for the situation.

greeting and closing

The letter ends with a courteous closing.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

157 words

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