The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart depicts the trend between tourists visiting
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and from the
UK
over 20 years. The bar chart compares the popularity of countries visited by
UK
residents in the year 1999.
Overall
, both visits to and from Europe showed upward trends, especially after 1985 rising dramatically. Residents in the
UK
preferred travelling to France, followed by Spain. In 1979, over 10
million
folks travelled abroad from the
UK
,
then
rose progressively to 20
million
before exhibiting a noticeable surge from 1985 to 1999, at nearly 55
million
.
On the other hand
, the trend of overseas residents visiting the
UK
showed a similar trend,
also
starting at around 10
million
, increasing steadily to nearly 25
million
in 1999 after experiencing relatively stable until 1984. With regard to the most popular countries visited by
UK
inhabitants in 1999. France and Spain were the most popular countries,
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about 9 and 11
million
visitors respectively.
Conversely
, Turkey, Greece and the USA
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were the least explored ones by the
UK
people, with the number being from 2 to 4
million
.
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