The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#demand #electricity #england #winter #summer #english #home #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The line graph compares the consumption of electric units on a typical summer and winter
day
, and the pie chart illustrates the proportions of electricity used in various electronic appliances.
Overall
, it can be observed that the demand for electric power is significantly lower in
the summer Change preposition
on
day
. Meanwhile, the heating system for homes consumed the most amount of electricity.
Looking at the line graph, the total units consumed at the start of the day
were around 35k and nearly 16k for winters
and summers
, respectively. The figure for summers
remains stable from 6 to 9, while
for winters
it declined to nearly 30k. However
, between 6 and 9, the figures for both increase sharply; the units increase to 40k for winters
and 20k for summers
. While
the demand for power in the summers
remains relatively stable in the later hours of the day
, for the winters
, it reaches its peak at nearly 45k.
On the other hand
, the pie charts show that nearly 52.5% of electricity is used in the heating systems of British homes. Additionally
, the kitchen appliances and entertainment devices each used 15% of the total power. Finally
, the proportion for the
vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electrical tools accounted for 17.5%.Correct article usage
apply
Submitted by shahroz99dev on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words day, k, winters, summers with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
▼