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The graphs below show a comparison of the expenses in the UK and the US

The graphs below show a comparison of the expenses in the UK and the US
The pie charts give information about the six different groups that cost people in two countries, the
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 and the US.
It is clear that
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 the proportion of the three groups is the same and the rest of the parts are varied. As can be seen, for every country, there is a series about their daily routine which for DVDs, going out, and transport have the same percentage, 10, 15, and 15 per cent respectively.
According to
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 the pie charts, to compare books, we are able to see that the US consists of a little more than the
UK
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, at about 3%. In the US, the money
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 expensed for food is the largest portion and
also
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 rather than the
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. Only rent accounted for the highest percentage in the
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 and experienced the greatest number in the US, with 30%. In the US, all of the parts, except rent, have the highest percentage.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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