The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram represents the relationship occurring between certain different languages.
Starting from the first big division of the
English
language into American
English
and British English
it can be analyzed with always more detailed views.
In particular
, we can see how the American
English
branch is the root of the languages spoken by the USA citizens and the Canadian ones. The USA American
English
accent refers to Philipines
, Correct article usage
the Philipines
American
Samoa, west
Coast, mid-west, Correct article usage
the west
north-east
Coast, southern and Correct your spelling
northeast
puerto-rico
, Change the capitalization
Puerto Rico
while
in Canada it can be found another
influence Change preposition
in another
such
as the fRench
Correct your spelling
French
one
, Correct pronoun usage
apply
in addition
to angelophone
Canada.
Correct your spelling
anglophone
On the other hand
, the British English
branch is widespread in many more different countries than the American
one. For
instance
it is spoken not only in the British Add a comma
instance,
isles
but Capitalize word
Isles
also
in West
Indies, Africa, Correct article usage
the West
Indian-Pakistan
, Correct your spelling
India
Far
East and Australasia. Here there are many more Correct article usage
the Far
dialectes
Correct your spelling
dialects
such
as Indian English
, “Malay and Chinese” English
and also
”anglophones Africa” english
.Change the capitalization
English
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