The shown bar chart provides data on the total quantity of minutes of telephone calls in the United Kingdom between 1995 and 2002. The calls are divided into three categories and are denoted in billions.
GIven
above is the bar chart depicting the total quantity of Correct your spelling
Given
minutes
of the United Kingdom telephone calls between 1995 and 2002. The call types being studied were local fixed calls, national and international fixed line
and Fix the agreement mistake
lines
mobiles
calls. Change the noun form
mobile
Also
,"Billions" was used as the units of minutes
being measured.
According to
the chart, the figures indicated that mobile calls has
shown a significant upward trend over the 17 years. Change the verb form
have
Likewise
, figures of National and international fixed calls has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
also
shown a steady growth in terms of minutes
over the years. However
, the minutes
of local fixed line calls has
been showing a declining trend since 1999 from 90 Change the verb form
have
billions
to around 70 Change to singular
billion
billions
only Change to singular
billion
in
the end of the study.
To summarize, it was particularly interesting to note that mobile calls Change preposition
at
has
been replacing traditional Change the verb form
have
landline
within a short period of time despite international calls Fix the agreement mistake
landlines
remained
important among the United Kingdom citizens. Wrong verb form
remaining
Moreover
, the accending
figures Correct your spelling
ascending
of
mobile calls suggested that Change preposition
for
landline
might be completely replaced by mobile calls in the future.Fix the agreement mistake
landlines
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