Your manager is going ot leave your company next month. You and a colleague want to give your manager a leaving present. Write a letter ot this colleague. nI your letter say how you feel about your manager leaving describe a possible present for your manager suggest arrangements for buying the present
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am writing to express my sincere sadness upon hearing of your departure next month. Your leadership and guidance have been invaluable to our team. I have learned a lot from you, and I will miss your mentorship.
To show our appreciation, I propose we give you a farewell
gift
. Perhaps a personalized photo album or a gift
card to your favorite
bookstore would be fitting. I am happy to contribute towards the cost and would be grateful if you could suggest a suitable Change the spelling
favourite
gift
.
Let's discuss the logistics of purchasing and presenting the gift
. We could collect funds from team members or coordinate with the HR department for a company-wide contribution.
I hope you will consider this
suggestion. Thank you for your unwavering support and dedication to our team. I wish you all the best in your future endeavors
.
Best regards,
Rejoice.Change the spelling
endeavours
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task response
Clarify the role of the colleague in the letter. Since you're addressing the colleague about a gift for the manager, adjust the greeting accordingly and avoid addressing Mr. Johnson directly.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance readability. For example, you could consolidate the logistical discussion into one paragraph for better clarity.
suitable writing tone
Your writing tone is highly appropriate for the context, balancing professionalism with warmth.
logical structure
You have a clear and logical structure in your letter, which makes it easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite