The following pie charts show the places where adults aged 20+ and children in the age group 2 to 19 ate in the year 2005 in the US. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the
population
of ages in Yemen
and Italy in 2000 and anticipation for 2050.
Overall
, what stands out from the charts is that with the exception of year
2000 in Change the article
the year
Yemen
, the proportion of people
between 15 and 59 in all charts is
constitutes the highest proportion.
In 2000, Unnecessary verb
apply
people
aged 15 to 59 comprised almost 46% of the population
in Yemen
, while
it is expected that this
figure will witness a rise in 2050 and will reach to
57.3%. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, in Yemen
0-14-year-olds and individuals aged 60 and over accounted for around half of the total and 3.6%, respectively. It is projected that by 2050 the prospective figures for people
between 0 and 14, and, 65 and over will have reached to
37% and almost 6%.
Italy’s 15-Change preposition
apply
59-year-old
were responsible for 61.6% of their Correct your spelling
59-year-olds
population
in 2000, while
this
figure will undergo a decline and will be 46.2% in 2050. the elderly people
in Italy formed about one-fourth of individuals in the year 2000. Over the next 50 years, this
figure will rise to 42.3%. 0-14-year-olds formed about 15% in 2000, while
the anticipation indicates that this
population
will see a slight fall and decreased
to 11.5% in 2050.Wrong verb form
decrease
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