How is the procedure of claim for loss interest due to late of issuing the performance certificate and payment certificate

Further
to the
last
meeting, it seems that there isn'
t
any progress on preparing the
Performance
Cert
to the right of our subcontractor for
this
,
and
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as well as a certificate for the
last
retention
amount
. The
Performance
Certificate procedure as we
did elaborate
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in the meeting,
which is
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totally
complying
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to
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Main-contract Sub-Clause 14.11, that the sequence of project documents shall be abided
to
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.
Otherwise
, it
is
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doesn'
t
make sense shall you
focused
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on
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the outtract
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outtract
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attract
out tract
direction of management procedures, which has been
keeping
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asking
on
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for
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deduction
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a deduction
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of ~ 619 Mil VND for the stolen few
items
FS
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of FS
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equipment at Podium and
few
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a few
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items
of MEP
items
at L1&L15/L17 of T1T2; or Cofico has brought in your various domestic subcontractors to
such
a meetings
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to dragging things. Meanwhile, all the documents related to the contract security responsibility have been clarified during the project under construction as well as the resort under operation stage. Part of
this
document is extracted for your tracking if you wish. But once again as mentioned, it doesn'
t
make sense at all for us to keep justified on
this
at
this
time being, we need to settle the first one as
basic
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fundamental procedure it is. The assessment for
last
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claim of
retention
submitted
since
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1st Dec 23 and
reminder
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the reminder
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on 24 April 24 ( 1 day after the HASD top Management verbally not
objected
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to
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Performance
Certificate, and
Payment
Cert
for
retention
) have been pending
months
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till today.
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the procedures for
this
are totally
inline
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with main contract condition 14.11 too, and
also
respective subcontract clauses. Once again, please assist to expedite on
this
Performance
Cert
, and
Payment
Cert
for the remaining
at
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counterpart's discrete decision if it is wished so on the mentioned intended deduction
amount
. Please be noted that all the defects have been certified since 15 Jan 24 including two mentioned
items
of stolen FS devices and certain MEP
items
. and the claim
submitted
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since
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1 Dec 23 and updated on 25 April 24. Trust you shall
aware
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of the lost interest on
this
solely
retention
amount
( let
along
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the other pending huge
amount
of
payment
) has been much over the
amount
that you intended to
mismus
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missus
on our
payment
cert
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