The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graphs demonstrate the

music

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albums genre bought in Britain based on gender and age group.

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, it is notable that the proportion of male buyers exceeds that of females. Ages between 16 to 24 and 25 to 34 are the major per cent in both types of

music

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. In Pop

Music

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, the majority of purchasers are 25 to 35 years old which accounts for about 32%, next to it are 16 to 24 years of age.

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, the difference between male and female buyers is nearly 10% with men being the dominant. Rock, looks similar to Pop

music

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. The

men

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men's

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ratio is more than women and most purchasers are in

mid-twenties

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their mid-twenties

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to mid-thirties and

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second,

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to it are sixteen to twenty-four years of age.

However

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, Rock

Music

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has a higher demand than the other kind.