The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graphs demonstrate the
music
albums genre bought in Britain based on gender and age group.
Overall
, it is notable that the proportion of male buyers exceeds that of females. Ages between 16 to 24 and 25 to 34 are the major per cent in both types of music
.
In Pop Music
, the majority of purchasers are 25 to 35 years old which accounts for about 32%, next to it are 16 to 24 years of age. Additionally
, the difference between male and female buyers is nearly 10% with men being the dominant.
Rock, looks similar to Pop music
. The men
ratio is more than women and most purchasers are in Change noun form
men's
mid-twenties
to mid-thirties and Correct pronoun usage
their mid-twenties
second
to it are sixteen to twenty-four years of age. Add a comma
second,
However
, Rock Music
has a higher demand than the other kind.Submitted by amanihejji on
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