The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graphs demonstrate the
music
albums genre bought in Britain based on gender and age group.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it is notable that the proportion of male buyers exceeds that of females. Ages between 16 to 24 and 25 to 34 are the major per cent in both types of Linking Words
music
.
In Pop Use synonyms
Music
, the majority of purchasers are 25 to 35 years old which accounts for about 32%, next to it are 16 to 24 years of age. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the difference between male and female buyers is nearly 10% with men being the dominant.
Rock, looks similar to Pop Linking Words
music
. The Use synonyms
men
ratio is more than women and most purchasers are in Change noun form
men's
mid-twenties
to mid-thirties and Correct pronoun usage
their mid-twenties
second
to it are sixteen to twenty-four years of age. Add a comma
second,
However
, Rock Linking Words
Music
has a higher demand than the other kind.Use synonyms
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words music with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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