The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied bar chart indicates how much
money
people
earn in various wage groups in towns and the center
areas of Change the spelling
centre
Australia
.
A glance at the graph reveals that the highest average income yearly is Middle in cities.However
,people
do not make money
in low wages yearly in Australia
,which is the lowest amount of money
earned over the period.
Precisely %35 of people
are in the middle group
(between $70,000 and $120,000) in the cities in Australia
,compared to people
who are in regional centres at nearly %26 in this
country.Moreover
,the number of populations who live in regional centres are
in the lower middle Correct subject-verb agreement
is
group
(from $40,000 to $70,000) at approximately a third (%33),just ahead of people
in cities in the same group
at exactly %30 in Australia
.
In contrast
,roughly %13 of people
make money
about $40,000 or less which is the low
Correct word choice
lowest
group
in the towns of Australia
.Similarly
,the proportion of population
with high Add an article
the population
salary
in urban areas is a bit as much as the number of Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
people
in regional centres at %20 and %15,respectively.Submitted by TUTOO on
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