The chart illustrates the number of people from history museums, British museums, national museums and science museums who visoverall, the highest number of people visited British.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the British museum
displayed the highest Capitalize word
Museum
number
of visitors at just above 700,000 in August. Conversely
, the lowest people
who visited museums Correct quantifier usage
number of people
are
contributed to Unnecessary verb
apply
national
Add an article
the national
museum
in July and December.
To begin
with, the number
of British museums stood at slighly
above 400,000 in the beginning month, before rocketing to reach a peak of roughly 700,000 in August. Correct your spelling
slightly
Following
this
, it continued to slump at approximately 470,000 in the last
period. Similarly
, the history museums began at around 410,000 and then
hit a high of 600,000 in August. Next,
the figure plummeted to about 280,000 in December.
Turning to the remaining categories, the number
of people visiting Science
Correct article usage
the Science
museum
started at roughly 420,000, before peaking at 500,000 in September. After that, it experienced a dramatic decline to 300,000. Despite this
, the number
of visitors to the national museum
exhibited comparable
amount across the entire period.Correct article usage
a comparable
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