The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
The graphs demonstrate two key features: the
number
of
visitsors
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visitors
and
travelars
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travellers
in the
UK
, and the most popular visited
nattions
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nations
by
UK
citizins
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citizens
.
Overall
, it can be
obsereved
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observed
that over the years the
number
of
visitors
to the
UK
was slightly higher than the
number
of
UK
residents who
traveled
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travelled
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abroad;
however
, both
numbers
saw an increasing trend.
Additionally
,
france
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France
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was the most
visitied
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visited
country followed by
spain
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Spain
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. In 1979 the
number
of incoming and outgoing people was relatively close with a minor difference of about 2
million
travelars
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travellers
but the
numbers
continued to increase at different rates ;
subsequentally
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subsequently
, by 1984 , the difference -in the rate- grew larger ,and the overseas
travelars
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travellers
numbers
continued to rise
dramtically
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dramatically
while
numbers
of
visitors
increased modestly.
In
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the end of the period,visits abroad reached over 50
million
; visits to the
Uk
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UK
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,
however
, were just below 30
million
. The most visited nation by
UK
citizins
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citizens
is France with about 12
million
visitors
in 1999 .
secondly
came Spain which had over 9
million
visitors
.
Then
both the USA and Greece had about 3
million
oncomers
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consumers
incomers
from the
UK
. Turkey came in
last
with about 2
million
vistors
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visitors
.
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