The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

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visitors

and

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in the

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, and the most popular visited

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was slightly higher than the

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residents who

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abroad;

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saw an increasing trend.

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france

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was the most

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country followed by

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. In 1979 the

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of incoming and outgoing people was relatively close with a minor difference of about 2

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travelars

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travellers

but the

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continued to increase at different rates ;

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, by 1984 , the difference -in the rate- grew larger ,and the overseas

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travellers

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continued to rise

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dramatically

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increased modestly.

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the end of the period,visits abroad reached over 50

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; visits to the

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, were just below 30

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. The most visited nation by

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is France with about 12

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in 1999 .

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came Spain which had over 9

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visitors

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both the USA and Greece had about 3

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consumers

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. Turkey came in

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with about 2

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The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

Many today feel that attention spans are becoming shorter due to the prevalence of social media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More and more people in developed countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problem dose this cause? What do you think is a possible solution?

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Many people choose natural healing methods, such as acupuncture and massage therapy to recover from illness. Others prefer to use pharmaceutical drugs prescribe by their doctor for their aliments.