You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
The line graph illustrates the levels of
production
for petroleum, natural gas and coal in the United Kingdom
in
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a period of 19 years.
Overall
, petroleum is the most produced fuel
although
there are
flactuations
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fluctuations
throughout the given period. Coal
production
dropped and natural gases increased. In 1981, petroleum
production
had almost 90
units
of energy which is approximately 90 million
tones
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tonnes
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of oil.
This
increased rapidly to about 140
units
in 1984 and it plateaued at
this
level up to about 1987 before it faced a dip of about 100
units
in 1990. In 1999, it reached its peak of more than 140
units
. Coal
production
started at 80
units
in 1981 and
this
was maintained for 3 years.
This
was followed by a dramatic fall of less than 40
units
in 1984. There was a gradual drop up to 2000
where
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about 30
units
was
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were
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produced. Contrary, Natural gases which started at slightly less than 40
units
steadily increased and
it
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they
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reached
its
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their
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peak of more than 100
units
of energy in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fuel production
  • Trend
  • Steady
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant
  • Milestones
  • Turning point
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Evolve
  • Notable
  • Summarize
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