The propotion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.

The chart compares the amount of British people's income spent on 4

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of tools in 1998.

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,

while

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adults

were

spend

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on

food

in the highest proportion.

Children

were

spend

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their income on

music

. The

adults

especially

men

were

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spend

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on

food

about 14%

and

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women

used to

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spent

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around 39 per

cent

on

food

. In total

adults

were used 25% for

food

.

Children

boys

were spend

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9% on

food

and

girls

were used to

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11 per

cent

on nutrition. Generally,

children

were spent 10%.

Men's

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category there 10%

expenditure

on electronic devices.

Woman

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used to only 1% on electronic

equipments

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equipment

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. In total,

adults

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expenditure

is 5 per

cent

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Boys

were spent on electronic devices about 18% and

girls

were used to 5% on electronic

equipments

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equipment

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. In the category of

music

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music,

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children

were used to 39 per

cent

in

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overall

.

Boys

expenditure

were

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38% and

girls

were used to 40% on

music

.

Adults

in general

were

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spent only 5%

for

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music

.

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were used to 5% and women's

expenditure

were

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5% respectively on

music

.

Children

's

overall

expenditure

was 12 per

cent

on

videos

.

Boys

were used to 18% and

girls

were spend

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19% on

videos

.

Adults

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Adults'

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total

expenditure

was only 1 per

cent

for

videos

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Men

were used to 2% and women

were spend

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about 0,5% on

videos

.