The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart compares and contrasts the amount of
fish
and three distinct kinds of meat consumed, namely chicken, beef and lamb, by each person in a European country every week, over a 25-year period,from 1979 to 2004.
According to
the given chart, the
consumption
of all kinds of meat demonstrates downward trends, except for that of chicken.Interestingly, it is noticeable that the amount of
fish
consumed is less compared with the other three kinds of meat. Looking first at the chicken, whose
consumption
increased from just below 150
grams
to its peak: exactly 250
grams
during
this
given period.Moving on to the downward trends,
that is
,
fish
, beef and lamb.The
weights
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weight
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of beef consumed witnessed a
drastical
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drastic
decline, from around 200
grams
to approximately 100
grams
, 100
grams
in total, which was similar to the lamb’s
consumption
.
On the other hand
, there was a slight change in the amount of
fish
consumption
, which dipped from above 50
grams
to just under 50
grams
, between 1979 and 2004.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, consumption, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • metric tons
  • fluctuations
  • upward/downward trend
  • stabilize
  • peak
  • trough
  • overtake
  • steady decline/increase
  • sustainable
  • dietary habits
  • preferences
  • health consciousness
  • per capita
  • poultry
  • veal
  • stagnant
  • gradual
  • surpass
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