The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate
units
of electricity production
which were used by five types of fuel power
in Australia and France
in 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, in 1980, many people in Australia used coal for their electricity products while
in France
three types of fuels were demanded. Also
, in 2000, most Australian people used coal in comparison with French people who used Nuclear power
for their production
.
It is clear that
in 1980, the total production
in Australia was 100 units
and 50 of coal was used as power
supply. Besides
, both Natural Gas and Hydro Power
were 20. In 2000, the majority of the fuel source was coal with 130. Of course, two items were the lowest value with 2 such
as Oil and Natural Gas although
the total production
was 170 units
.
In France
, both Coal and Natural Gas were 25 and the highest second item was Oil with 20 in 1980. In 2000, Nuclear Power
was the most used item with 126. The total production
in France
became doubled in 2000 with 180 units
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