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The bar chart below shows the number of students who studied three different subjects in 2001, 2002 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the number of students who studied three different subjects in 2001, 2002 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart indicates comprehensive information regarding a gender-based comparison in selecting 8 majors in 2005. From an
overall
 perspective, it is starkly apparent that Social
Science
, Languages, and Art are the most sought-after fields by females,
while
 other majors were appealing to boys.
Moreover
, the Social
Science
 with the most participants was the girls' main area of
intereset
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interest
,
while
 the
Science
 was the most favorable for males. Upon more rigorous scrutiny it can be revealed that females selected
the
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Social
Science
 the most
with
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an
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 it was followed by Languages
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.
The
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Art,
science
, and
litrature
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literature
 took a similar portion at somewhere in the vicinity of 13 with Sciences a
liitle
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little
 bit less than the two others. The law and mathematics took the bottom of the list with just more and less than 5, respectively. As regards females, it can be seen that the Sciences was the most sought-after major with
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 23 followed by Mathematics and
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literature
, and Social
Science
. The Arts and Languages were the least l majors,
in contrast
 with ladies.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart, illustrates, number of students, academic years
  • Trends, increased, decreased, remained stable
  • Popularity, more students, consistently, annually
  • Highest figure, lowest figure, peaked at, hit a low of
  • Reasons for trends, job market demand, curriculum changes
  • Summarize, key points, shifts in preferences, data overview
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