The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The chart illustrates the duration of the total number of telephone calls in billions of minutes which were divided into three categories, local-fixed
line
, national and international - fixed
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international-fixed
line
and mobiles
Fix the agreement mistake
mobile
all
calls, in the UK, between 1995 and 2002.
In the local - fixed Correct determiner usage
apply
line
, the numbers
increased from 70 billion
in 1995 to 90 billion
in 1999, making it the highest phone call made. However
, from 1999 to 2002 the numbers
lowered steadily from 90 billion
and returned to 70 billion
just like in 1995.
The national and international - fixed line
started under
40 Change preposition
at under
billion
in 1995, but soon the numbers
gradually rose up
to approximately 60 Change preposition
apply
billion
by the year 2002. On the other hand
, the total duration from cell phones in 1995 was around 3 - 4 billion
, making mobiles as
the lowest Change preposition
apply
phone
call made in the UK. By 2002, the Correct quantifier usage
number of phone
numbers
grew dramatically to around 42 billion
.
In conclusion, with
the national and international - fixed Change preposition
apply
line
and calls from cell phones had the same upward trend between 1995 to 2002, but both of them were still lower compared to the local - fixed line
which though the numbers
decreased in 2002 it
was still the highest.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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