The graph below shows prediction about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparision where relevant.

The graph below shows prediction about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030.

summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparision where relevant.
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The line bar illustrates the forecast
of
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three global
languages
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students in a
two
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two-year
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year
gap from 2020 until 2030. The trend clearly shows that there will be a constant increase
of
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demand for those
languages
. In general, the
year
of
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2030 will be the record for the highest number of students learning the
languages
. The starting
year
remained the lowest as it is the base of the prediction.
While
in common all will have an upward tendency during those ten years, there is a halt between 2024 and 2026 where English will have a dramatic fall. At the same time, Spanish and Mandarin
also
will experience slight increases, compared to the prediction in the
year
before and after. In the rank of the
languages
, English is estimated to be the highest language most people will choose to learn, followed by Mandarin on the
second,
and Spanish at
last
. The figure on the top remained untouched, with gaps roughly doubling the starting number of the rest. 
Overall
, in the case of learning new
languages
, there will always be more than a hundred million students every
year
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every language, especially in English.
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