The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
given
three maps depict the substitutes in the West Verb problem
apply
Park
Secondary School since its construction in 1950, also
in 1980, and in
2010.
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apply
Overall
, it is clear that
the most numbers of changes happened between 1950 and 1980. However
, by 2010, there was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
also
few but important differences.
The houses that have taken place in
the west side of the map of 1950, were equally replaced by Change preposition
on
car
Add an article
the car
a car
park
and science block. Additionally
, farmland that was in the west-south corner has became
a Change the form of the verb
become
sports
field
. There was also
little space left between car
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the car
park
, science block, and sports
field
. After that, in another 30 years, all the ground that was taken by sports
field
in 1980 Fix the agreement mistake
fields
have been
replaced by Wrong verb form
was
car
Add an article
the car
park
in 2010 and almost half of the playground Fix the agreement mistake
parks
were
taken by Change the verb form
was
sports
Add an article
the sports
field
. Fix the agreement mistake
fields
Nevertheless
, the main road that is
on top of the map never changed. The same is about a school.Submitted by assiya.nurbergen18 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, sports, field with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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