The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
Verb problem
apply
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three maps depict the substitutes in the West
Park
Secondary School since its construction in 1950,
also
in 1980, and
in
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apply
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2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the most numbers of changes happened between 1950 and 1980.
However
, by 2010, there
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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also
few but important differences. The houses that have taken place
in
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on
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the west side of the map of 1950, were equally replaced by
car
Add an article
the car
a car
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park
and science block.
Additionally
, farmland that was in the west-south corner has
became
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become
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a
sports
field
. There was
also
little space left between
car
Correct article usage
the car
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park
, science block, and
sports
field
. After that, in another 30 years, all the ground that was taken by
sports
field
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fields
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in 1980
have been
Wrong verb form
was
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replaced by
car
Add an article
the car
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park
Fix the agreement mistake
parks
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in 2010 and almost half of the playground
were
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was
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taken by
sports
Add an article
the sports
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field
Fix the agreement mistake
fields
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.
Nevertheless
, the main road
that is
on top of the map never changed. The same is about a school.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words park, sports, field with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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