The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given diagram
provide
data about the Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
process
of manufacturing drinking water
with the use of solar energy.
Overall
, he
Correct your spelling
the
process
of creating drinking water
by solar power is an artificial method which involves 4 main stages, beginning with collecting energy from the sun and ending with usable water
are
produced.
Having looked at the provided diagram for more details, it is apparent that the Unnecessary verb
apply
process
begins with a solar panel is
heated by the light from the sun. Unnecessary verb
apply
Next,
thanks to the converter, the energy from the panel are
converted into electricity which powers a pump located in Change the verb form
is
underground
well.
In the next stage, Correct article usage
an underground
water
is pumped through the tube and then
it flows into the water
tank which is situated on the surface of the wooden platform. Following
this
, in the tank, water
goes through a filter to make sure it is drinkable. After the filtering process
, drinking water
flows through the tube to a moveable container. Moreover
, the tube is also
equipped with a tap, which allows using water
from the main water
tank.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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