The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart below gives the percentage of total spending on three sections: food and drink, restaurant and hotel and entertainment in 5 different
age
groups of residents in the UK in the year 2004 Generally speaking, it can be seen that expenditure on food and drink increases with
age
.
In contrast
, the opposite was true for restaurants and hotels, and we have entertainment, increasing and suddenly dropping for the "75+" group.
Additionally
, citizens aged 61-75 accounted for the highest pay in all three categories. Taking a look at the graph, we can tell the Food and Drink section is certainly not the most paid by people under the
age
of 30. But it
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increased with
age
, going from only 6% to nearly 23%...
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • categories
  • age groups
  • residents
  • overview
  • breakdown
  • spending habits
  • comparison
  • trends
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • highest
  • lowest
  • significant
  • notable
  • priorities
  • shifts
  • lifestyle needs
  • financial constraints
  • patterns
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