The line graph and the bar chart give the information and forecast about the vehicle numbers and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and the bar chart give the information and forecast about the vehicle numbers and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line
graph
and bar
graph
present data
as well as
values comparing the percentage of vehicle numbers and the amount of CO2 emissions in
tonnes
in British and Wales(in millions) from 2000 to 2020.
Overall
, what stands out from the
graph
is that vehicle numbers and CO2 emissions showed higher popularity over the given period. Looking at the details, it can be seen that, vehicles in England and Wales in 2000 were around 20 million. 10 years later, the average number went up slightly to 35 million and end of the year it showed a dramatic change of about a quarter. Examining the remaining bar
graph
, cars emitted significant numbers of CO2 from 2000 to 2020,
finally
, they reached around 3
tonnes
by 2020.
On the other hand
, trucks grew like cars and the amount was significantly less from 0.6
tonnes
in 2000 to 1.3
tonnes
in 2020.
Finally
, the amount of CO2 emissions from buses and vans
was
Change the verb form
were
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likely to keep constant values of approximately 0.4 and 0.8
tonnes
respectively.
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