The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.

The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
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The pie charts portray the average expenditure
of
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meals
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through
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30 years. Correspondingly, the line graph illustrates the
amount
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of
meals
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in both fast
food
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and
sitdown
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sit-down
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restaurants
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.
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, there was a remarkable
increases
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in the demand
of
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for
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fast
food
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meals
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.
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,
sit down
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restaurants
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exhibited a gradual growth. Regarding these rises, the budgets of
restaurants
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jumped noticeably throughout the given period of time.
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, home cooking experienced a dramatic decline. In detail, starting with the first provided year, the vast majority of families, 90%, preferred homemade
food
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,
while
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only 10% chose
food
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from outside.
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to that, by the year 1980, the rates changed by 5% to become 15% for
restaurants
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. Surprisingly, the money spent on
restaurants
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was more
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doubled to reach 35%.
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, in 2000, the expenditures were equally spent.
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the line graph, both types of
restaurants
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shared the same percentage, 20%, in the beginning year. As junk freaks were drastically rising, indoor
meals
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grew approximately 50% in 1990. At
this
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time, fast
food
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reached nearly 60% .
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,
sit down
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sit-down
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restaurants
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increased by about 10%,
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however
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junk
food
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generated 90%, which was the highest proportion by the end of
this
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era.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words meals, food, restaurants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage of food budget
  • Fast food restaurants
  • Sit-down restaurants
  • Trends
  • Increase/decrease
  • Rise in popularity
  • Gradual rise
  • Cultural factors
  • Economic growth
  • Busy lifestyles
  • Changing societal norms
  • Proliferation
  • Casual dining experiences
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