The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
The pie charts portray the average expenditure
of
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on
meals
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through
30 years. Correspondingly, the line graph illustrates the Change preposition
over
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
meals
in both fast Use synonyms
food
and Use synonyms
sitdown
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sit-down
restaurants
.
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Overall
, there was a remarkable Linking Words
increases
in the demand Change the noun form
increase
of
fast Change preposition
for
food
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meals
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In contrast
, Linking Words
sit down
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sit-down
restaurants
exhibited a gradual growth. Regarding these rises, the budgets of Use synonyms
restaurants
jumped noticeably throughout the given period of time. Use synonyms
Conversely
, home cooking experienced a dramatic decline.
In detail, starting with the first provided year, the vast majority of families, 90%, preferred homemade Linking Words
food
, Use synonyms
while
only 10% chose Linking Words
food
from outside. Use synonyms
In addition
to that, by the year 1980, the rates changed by 5% to become 15% for Linking Words
restaurants
. Surprisingly, the money spent on Use synonyms
restaurants
was more Use synonyms
that
doubled to reach 35%. Correct word choice
than
Lastly
, in 2000, the expenditures were equally spent.
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According to
the line graph, both types of Linking Words
restaurants
shared the same percentage, 20%, in the beginning year. As junk freaks were drastically rising, indoor Use synonyms
meals
grew approximately 50% in 1990. At Use synonyms
this
time, fast Linking Words
food
reached nearly 60% . Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
sit down
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sit-down
restaurants
increased by about 10%, Use synonyms
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however
junk Add the comma(s)
however,
food
generated 90%, which was the highest proportion by the end of Use synonyms
this
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