The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
The pie charts portray the average expenditure
of
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on
meals
through
30 years. Correspondingly, the line graph illustrates the Change preposition
over
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
meals
in both fast food
and sitdown
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sit-down
restaurants
.
Overall
, there was a remarkable increases
in the demand Change the noun form
increase
of
fast Change preposition
for
food
meals
. In contrast
, sit down
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sit-down
restaurants
exhibited a gradual growth. Regarding these rises, the budgets of restaurants
jumped noticeably throughout the given period of time. Conversely
, home cooking experienced a dramatic decline.
In detail, starting with the first provided year, the vast majority of families, 90%, preferred homemade food
, while
only 10% chose food
from outside. In addition
to that, by the year 1980, the rates changed by 5% to become 15% for restaurants
. Surprisingly, the money spent on restaurants
was more that
doubled to reach 35%. Correct word choice
than
Lastly
, in 2000, the expenditures were equally spent.
According to
the line graph, both types of restaurants
shared the same percentage, 20%, in the beginning year. As junk freaks were drastically rising, indoor meals
grew approximately 50% in 1990. At this
time, fast food
reached nearly 60% . Furthermore
, sit down
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sit-down
restaurants
increased by about 10%, however
junk Add the comma(s)
however,
food
generated 90%, which was the highest proportion by the end of this
era.Submitted by jenakhalil07 on
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