The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram reveals the total world

population

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percentage

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in four nations between 1950 and 2020

along with

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the estimations for 2050.

Overall

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, the

pecentages

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percentages

percentage

of the

population

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from

China

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and

Japan

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decrease, opposite to that of India.

It is clear that

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the

USA

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population

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percentage

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deccreasing

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decreasing

and is projected to remain

statble

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stable

in the future. In 1950, the percentages of the total world

population

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from India,

China

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, the

USA

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and

Japan

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were 15, nearly 25, around 7 and below 5 per

cent

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respectively.

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all changed in 2020 when there was an increase in its

popultion

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population

percentage

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to about 17 per

cent

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While

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the decrease was seen in 3 nations:

China

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, the

USA

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and

Japan

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accounting for 20, 5 and lower than 5 in order. The projected

percentage

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made for the total world

population

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from India would rise and reach the peak at approximately 18 per

cent

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, the

higest

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highest

perentage

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percentage

when compared to those from the other three countries where the drop is expected.

This

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accounts for 15 per

cent

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China

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, remaining at 5 per

cent

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in the

USA

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, and down to nearly 1 per

cent

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Japan

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To sum up

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, it is obvious that there has been a growing trend of

Indian

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population

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, which is

antiocipated

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anticipated

to grow higher,

while

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the drops are seen in

Chinese

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the Chinese

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, American and Japanese

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population

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populations

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

223 words

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Bar chart
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