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The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
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The provided picture gives data on the rate of
resources
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 given by Economics, Law,
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Commerce
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and Commerce
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 courses to the
first year
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 students.
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, the highest pre-
course
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 information was provided by
Commerce
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,
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lowest
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the lowest
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 rate was observed in Law's teaching method. The Economics
course
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 was ranked the lowest among the courses because of its introduction information,
while
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 their teaching system observed the highest percentage of 95% which was the same as
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Commerce
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the Commerce
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course
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' ranking rate. Law
course
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 took
lowest
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the lowest
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 position nearly in every
criteria
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, one of the exceptions was other
resources
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 from which it got 80% which was higher than
Economics
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the Economics
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course
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's position of 60%.
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Commerce
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The commerce
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course
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's pre-
course
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 information and teaching method is equal to 95% which is the maximum in that table.
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, their tutors,
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resources
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and resources
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such
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 as print and other
resources
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 were 93%, 85% and 81% respectively, which made
this
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course
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's position in all ranking
criterias
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criteria
 the highest.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words resources, commerce, course with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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