The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given. You should write at least 150 words.
The provided picture gives data on the rate of
resources
given by Economics, Law,
Commerce
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and Commerce
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courses to the
first year
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first-year
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students.
Overall
, the highest pre-
course
information was provided by
Commerce
,
while
lowest
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the lowest
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rate was observed in Law's teaching method. The Economics
course
was ranked the lowest among the courses because of its introduction information,
while
their teaching system observed the highest percentage of 95% which was the same as
Commerce
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the Commerce
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course
' ranking rate. Law
course
took
lowest
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the lowest
show examples
position nearly in every
criteria
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criterion
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, one of the exceptions was other
resources
from which it got 80% which was higher than
Economics
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the Economics
show examples
course
's position of 60%.
Commerce
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The commerce
show examples
course
's pre-
course
information and teaching method is equal to 95% which is the maximum in that table.
Moreover
, their tutors,
resources
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and resources
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such
as print and other
resources
were 93%, 85% and 81% respectively, which made
this
course
's position in all ranking
criterias
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criteria
the highest.
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