The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

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The provided picture gives data on the rate of

resources

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given by Economics, Law,

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Commerce

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courses to the

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students.

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information was provided by

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rate was observed in Law's teaching method. The Economics

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was ranked the lowest among the courses because of its introduction information,

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their teaching system observed the highest percentage of 95% which was the same as

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Commerce

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the Commerce

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course

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' ranking rate. Law

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took

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position nearly in every

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, one of the exceptions was other

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from which it got 80% which was higher than

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the Economics

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course

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's position of 60%.

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Commerce

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's pre-

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information and teaching method is equal to 95% which is the maximum in that table.

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, their tutors,

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as print and other

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were 93%, 85% and 81% respectively, which made

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

148 words

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