The chart below gives information on the percentage of British poeple giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data shows how the percentage of British citizens donating to charity changed
thoughout
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throughout
years
, highlighting the connection between this
quantity and the donors' age.
First of all, it is clear that
people under
their fifties gave less in 2010 than in 1990. The major change regarded the younger, whose percentage dropped by almost 10% in twenty Change preposition
in
years
. As far as the population between 26 and 35 is concerned, it decreased from 30% to less than 25%, while
it went down from 42% to 35% considering people between 36 and 50 years
old.
However
, when it comes to citizens over 50 years
old, the trend seems to be changing. In fact, the percentage of donors between 51 and 65 years
old increased from 35% in 1990 to 40% in 2010. Similarly
, people older than 65 years
old giving money to charity rose from 30% to 35%.Submitted by camilla.balzarotti02 on
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