The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates
comparison
of both genders Add an article
a comparison
the comparison
whose
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who
countinued
their Correct your spelling
continued
continue
education
in three different decades whether it part-time
education
or ful-
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full-time
time
education
.
Overall
, it clearly shows that both males and females of part
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part-time
time
students
got the highest average in all 3 decades compared to full
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full-time
time
students
.
The numbers
of females
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female
part
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part-time
time
students
increase respectively through 30 years from almost 750 thousand
in year
70/71 , 850 thousand
in year
80/81 and 1100 thousand
in 90/91. In addition
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
females
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female
full
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full-time
time
students
also
increased and started at very low numbers
by less than 100 thousand
then
it jumped sharply more than the
double in Correct article usage
apply
year
80/81 then
it countiued
to grow to reach Correct your spelling
continued
the
peak Correct article usage
a
by
Change preposition
of
aproxmaty
300 Correct your spelling
approximately
thousand
.
Part
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Part-time
time
education
for males figure began high exactly
1000 Change preposition
at exactly
thousand
in 70/71 then
dropped by 200 thousand
then
went back up in early
90s to Change the article
the early
be
900 Unnecessary verb
apply
thousand
. However
figures in Add a comma
However,
ful
Correct your spelling
full
time
went different it started 100 thousand
in 70s
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the 70s
then
the numbers
got higher to be 300 thousand
in year
90/91.Correct article usage
the year
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