The graph below shows the different types of activities attended by three groups of people living in the UK in 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart illustrates the proportion of people from different age groups attending four types of activities in the UK in 2005.

Overall

it can be seen that

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Going to the cinema was the most popular activity of

adults

and

teenagers

,

Whereas

the elderly preferred visiting a library the most compared to others. As can be seen from the graph,

Adults

and

teenagers

seemed to have similar interests.They were mostly desired in going to the cinema,which was 70% in

teenagers

followed by 65% in

adults

.

While

other

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three activities were occupied by

adults

more than

teenagers

.Visiting a museum,visiting a library and shopping were attended by

adults

,occupying 50%,40% and 25% respectively.

Teenagers

showed the same interest trends ,but the proportion

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5% less which was 45%,35% and 20% respectively.

However

, the elderly had different interests.The most common activity among them was visiting a library which was 55%.Followed closely by going to the cinema and visiting a museum,occupying 50% and 35% respectively.The

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popular activity was shopping taking part

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only 10%.