The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The illustration depicts the information about
produce
of Replace the word
production
ethanol
, which is considered a biofuel.
Overall
, it is clear that
process
of producing Correct article usage
the process
ethanol
contains 9 steps. It begins with the
taking the Correct article usage
apply
energy
from carbon dioxide which is emit
Change the verb form
is emitted
from
cars and ends with the Change preposition
by
producing
of Replace the word
production
ethanol
and using them
Correct pronoun usage
it
to
Change preposition
for
transportation
.
The process
starts with the releasing of carbon dioxide from the cars to
the atmosphere and the Change preposition
into
plants
taking the energy
from this
. After farmers harvest this
Correct determiner usage
these
plants
and crop
Fix the agreement mistake
crops
is going
Wrong verb form
go
to
Change preposition
through
the
Correct article usage
a
process
called pre-processing, which includes the grinding to
cellulose.Change preposition
of
Then
biology researchers make sugars from cellulose under laboratory conditions.
In the next step, there microbes add
to sugar and mixed. Wrong verb form
are added
As a result
, we can take the ethanol
from this
combination and use in
Correct pronoun usage
it in
transportation
ways. For example
, fuel for the
planes, Correct article usage
apply
cars
and Correct word choice
and cars
then
CO2 emit up
from transports and the new Wrong verb form
emitted
one
cycle will begin.
In conclusion, the production of Correct pronoun usage
apply
ethanol
as a biofuel involves a multi-step process
that effectively converts carbon dioxide emissions from vehicles into a usable energy
source. Beginning with the capture of CO2 by plants
and continuing through harvesting, pre-processing, and biochemical conversion, the process
ultimately yields ethanol
. This
ethanol
can then
be utilized as a fuel for various forms of transportation
. The cycle completes as transportation
activities release CO2 back into the atmosphere, which is then
reabsorbed by plants
, perpetuating the loop. This
method highlights the potential of biofuels to create a more sustainable and cyclical energy
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, process, energy, transportation, plants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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