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The give graph shows the consumption of fast food in UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer making comparisons where relevant and reporting the main features.

The give graph shows the consumption of fast food in UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer making comparisons where relevant and reporting the main features.
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The given graph illustrates hamburgers,
Pizza
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, and
Fish
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 &
Chips
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consumption
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 per week in the UK between 1970 and 1990. It is interesting to note that both
Fish
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 &
Chips
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 and
Pizza
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consumption
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 saw exponential growth in the mentioned period
while
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Pizza
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consumption
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 declined prominently from 1970 to 1980 and was mostly steady
thereafter
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.
Although
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Fish
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 &
Chips
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consumption
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 was growing throughout, there was a steep rise in
Fish
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 &
Chips
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consumption
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 from 1980 to 1990.
Similarly
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, Hamburger
consumption
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 rose significantly from 1985. At the start of 1970, Pizaa
consumption
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 was more than thrice the
consumption
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 of
Fish
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 &
Chips
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 or Hamburger, but by the end of 1990,
Fish
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 &
Chips
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consumption
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 was more than twice the
consumption
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 of
Pizza
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.
However
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, Hamburger
consumption
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 rose to the same level by the end of 1990 as what
Pizza
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consumption
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 had been at the start of 1970. It is noteworthy that
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consumption
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 was the same as
Fish
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 &
Chips
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consumption
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 around 1983.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, fish, chips, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trends
  • dietary preferences
  • steady increase
  • significant drop
  • peak points
  • economic conditions
  • marketing strategies
  • health awareness
  • public health impact
  • cultural shifts
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